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Short Story: Original Sin

Posted on | February 10, 2010 | 2 Comments

My short story, Original Sin has been published on Metazen and is currently available to read.

I’d like it if you could take a look.

You can read it here.

If you like short/flash stories, you should definitely subscribe to Metazen as there’s always lots of consistently good stuff there.

I’m off to find a corner in which to curl up.

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2 Responses to “Short Story: Original Sin”

  1. Barbara
    February 11th, 2010 @ 14:08

    Beautifully written!

  2. Gerry Hayes
    February 11th, 2010 @ 21:02

    Very kind, B. Thank you.

Gerry Hayes

Gerry Hayes

I mostly sit around all day and drink tea. Occasionally, I write stuff and send it to strangers so they can humiliate me and debase my efforts. Other than the self-harm to dull the shame of failure, it's not a bad life. Like I say, there's tea.

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